8 Golden Rules for Building Landing Pages that Generate Huge Email Lists

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8 Golden Rules for Building Landing Pages that Generate Huge Email Lists

Two months ago I wrote a piece onhow a startup can get what it wants from an email campaign.

Before you even start your email list, though, there's something else you need to get right:

The landing page.

My checklist for landing page excellence is not (very) complicated, but that doesn't make it easy. If you address each point when you create your next landing page, expect your results to blow up.

1. Be Crystal Clear in Your Message

I know you think you're being clear.

You're probably not.

You're probably only being clear about the WHAT. People don't care yet. First, they need to buy into the WHY.

Why should the readers spend their precious time interacting with your brand?

If you can answer the question above in 5 words, you're on your way to the kind of clarity that compels people to action.

2. Benefits Up Front, Features in the Back

Once you're clear about why you exist and why the reader should care, you can flesh it out.

Not with your features, though. Not yet.

Flesh it out with benefits.

Will they feel great about being a part of your philanthropic movement? Will they rest easier when your A.I. virtual lawyer service is working around the clock to protect them from lawsuits? Whatever you offer, people join because of a feeling.

How they will feel is paramount. That's benefits

How you will deliver that feeling is secondary. That's features.

I like to put the majority of the feature-talk behind a micro-commitment, such as an email opt-in. Once someone has shown you a small sign of trust, they're magnitudes more likely to sit through a list of feature comparisons.

3. Focus the Eye with Tidy Design

"Perfection is achieved not when there is nothing more to add, but when there is nothing left to take away."

  • – Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

Anything more than what you need is probably a distraction.

Ergo: no sidebar. Use a clean, single-column design that visitors can easily scroll over until their gaze fixes on your all-important CTA.

An uncluttered design is much more effective at leading the eye where you want it to go. Everyone skims. Use that to your advantage with thoughtful white space. Spacing content liberally leads to pleasing designs that are easy to consume.

4. Perfect Spelling & Grammar

I shouldn't have to say this. (But sadly I do!)

No matter what grade you got in English Lit, get a proofreader to go over your landing page. This is the public front to your product, at least for now. It must be error-free.

5. Be Ready for the Data

The internet can leave you strangely blind if you're not data-savvy.

So get data-savvy.

Otherwise, your page will need to be either a one-hit-wonder or dead in the water.

  1. Install Google Analytics as a default. This will tell you whether people are coming from search results, from typing in your domain name, or through a backlink.
  2. Use email automation software to track email addresses collected and (when you start sending emails) number of opens, which links are clicked, and much more.
  3. Implement heatmapping software to see how far visitors scroll, where they click, and even where their mouse cursor hovers.

My heatmap recommendations would be Hotjar or Kissmetrics, though there are many options available.

6. Show Proof or Go Home

If you don't prove your claims somehow, the only people who sign up will be people who already know and trust you.

A great landing page does not rely on your reputation preceding you. It convinces visitors on its own.

Examples of proof:

  • A testimonial or recommendation (preferably from someone your audience would know of).
  • Screenshots of your software or app in action.
  • Other behind-the-scenes content (ideally live-action video of you and your team explaining your vision and story).

7. Funk-up Your Call to Action

You must have only one CTA. If you must have two, then you need two landing pages!

Your clean design is primed to lead the eye smoothly down to the action you'd like the visitor to take. Don't let a distraction slip in at the last moment!

The best wording for a CTA is little original, even a little fun. The standard "Click Here" or "Learn More" won't get optimum results.

It depends on the tone of your company, but even "Hell yeah! Count me in!" would at least grab a few more brain cells than "Subscribe".

Better yet, make it specific to the offering. Example: "Yes, I Want My Free Time Back", if your offering's main value proposition is saving time.

8. End with the Headline

80% of people never make it past the headline.

According to some of the world's best copywriters, up to half of the time it takes to write a persuasive content piece should be spent on the headline.

The headline is no small detail. It can easily make or break your success. Literally.

That's why I'll leave you with one last non-intuitive tip: If you're struggling with the headline, try leaving it alone until you finish the rest of the page. Often, a flash of inspiration will come to you when you didn't expect it.

James M
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Educated as a biologist, I ended university by working in a small lab for an entrepreneur who was helping farmers produce more crops. The lab work was not for me, but I became fascinated by business. I learned all about sales and marketing, which led me to content marketing. I joined a startup in Poland to hone my writing skills, something I had always been gifted in ever since I was a boy. I discovered there was something both scientific AND creative about content marketing, and my talent began to shine. In the five years since graduating, I've helped many companies to produce engaging content, and even helped a few with their content marketing strategies. I like the slick interface of Scripted, and I'm aiming to use it to reach more people who might want my carefully crafted (and marketing-savvy) prose to help them achieve their goals.
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